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It was hard for me to write this journal, because on one hand I’d like to tell you guys aaaaall about the story…but I know it’s better if I don’t do that xd If I ever want to translate this book, then it won’t be a surprise for you guys anymore. So what I can do is give you a list of the old and some of the new characters. With the old characters I’ll give you a small explanation of what I changed and with the new ones a bit of info. Firstly I’ll tell you something about the world this story takes place in:

 

So Naira and the rest live in a world FULL of creatures. Everything except angels and humans are called syndari (aka the “monsters”). Most humans are blissfully unaware of the syndari their existence, so in order to protect humanity there is an order called: “The Order Of Archangel Michael”, which is founded by the Roman Catholic church. This order sends their human soldiers called the caelistirans after the syndari who hurt people.

Anyway, here’s the list! ;)

 

Old:

    ·       Naira Takemaru: as a child she was adopted by the Takemaru family, who turned out to be Satanists. When they tried to sacrifice her in a ritual, things went wrong. Naira got possessed by an unknown demon and killed the whole clan. When she was found by Aldenrey (who will be mentioned later) and his team, he decided to take the girl with him and make her a caelistiran. Now 10 years later in the story, life is hard on her. Because of her past she is constantly judged (when you’re possessed for a long time or by a powerful high ranked demon it changes your appearance: unnatural hair, eyes,…) She tries to ignore that however and works hard towards her only goal in life: become a demon hunter and join the institute of London. When the high priest, called Ruber, unexpectedly comes to visit her school, her whole life is flipped upside down.

 

(I also made her personality a bit more sarcastic, bitter and stubborn. With a sensitive and insecure core. It’s actually how I imagined her originally to be in DID)

 

    ·       Hayden Wiltshire: he is not an angel anymore, but the only living son of the noble Wiltshire family. He has a stern and old fashioned father, who wants his son to marry another noble caelistiran. Things don’t go as planned however, when he falls in love with Naira, who is not born as a caelistiran and neither a noble. As a loyal son Hayden tries to obey his father, but makes a big mistake in the process, which leads to Naira’s and his break up. He still has feelings for her and tries to make it up, which doesn’t go smoothly since Naira has lost her trust in him and is very stubborn. Their love-hate relationship takes an unexpected turn however, when Hayden gets mortally injured in combat.

 

    ·       Wendy Mc Lain: youngest daughter of a well-known and important caelistiran noble family. She’s the loyal friend of both Naira and Hayden. When she gets paralysed in combat she is send to a revalidation centre, where Valendra comes to look her up unexpectedly. After that things get pretty interesting and complicated when Valendra makes an even more unexpected proposal.

 

    -> These three go to the same school and are all final year students. In the story they will shortly graduate and become adult caelistirans.

 

    ·       Callisto: as a human she formed a blood contract with the devil more than 2000 years ago. Before she could fulfil her part she was saved by an arch angel however, which infuriated Satan.  Callisto then became an angel herself, fighting demons for thousands of years, but was degraded to a guardian angel after she got involved in a scandal. She wa s then assigned to a little girl, who was her first, but also her only human. When she tried to protect the girl from her planned death (by heaven), Callisto got banished from heaven. Now she is constantly travelling, trying to stay out of Satan’s hands, as he wants to claim what he should have received 2000 years ago.

 

    ·       Roxanne Rouge: is paranormally gifted. She can communicate with angels and the afterlife and is also the lead singer of the band “Poltergeist”. Roxanne will give Naira and Hayden shelter in their time of need when things get out of hand.

 

    ·       Valendra: is the bloodhound of the devil. She’s no longer Satan’s niece in this story, but is one of his favourites since she resembles her mother (Chimera) a lot. She has one important task: track down Callisto and bring her back to Satan. When she meets Wendy in combat she gets interested and follows the blond to a revalidation centre. After they talk the demon gets an idea and offers Wendy an unexpected proposal. Now the game can begin!

 

 

    ·       Kada: is the left hand of Satan and not his right one like in the old story. He was previously an angel, who was banished from heaven, after he leaked very important information to Satan. He and Malphas share a dark secret, which make things a little bit more tense and complicated in Hell.

 

    ·       Satan: same bastard as always xd though I changed something about his love interest~

 

    ·       Malphas: he is an incubus and the right hand of Satan (he got a big promotion after my old story xd). Malphas got his position after Chimera (the previous right hand) was killed by an unknown suspect. He will have an important impact on the story by the end. Not telling you what though~

 

 

    ·       Jun: will only be mentioned by name or appear in Kada’s memories for certain reasons.

 

    ·       Chimera: will only be mentioned by name or memories, because she got killed. She is not Satan’s sister, but she was his most loyal and trusted ally.

 

 

New:

    ·       Alderney Cornwell: is the head master of Naira’s school. He is also the one who found her after the sacrifice went wrong 10 years ago.  When he took her in he was still a normal caelistiran noble, but sometime later he was promoted to head master of a school and became Naira’s guardian. Ever since then they have become very close and are like father and daughter. Because life is so rough on her he does everything in his power to help her achieve her goals. Sadly this will backfire on him as the story goes on and he won’t be able to protect her from certain forces of power.

 

    ·       High priest Ruber: not your average neighbourhood priest! This man is a narcissistic, power hungry, sly, manipulative ego-maniac. He is also the founder of a new elite caelistiran group called the Messorem. “They’re kind of the FBI amongst the caelistiran community” according to him. When he goes to Naira’s school, Alderney and Carmen are anything, but pleased to be reunited with their old “friend”/team mate. The head master is even less pleased when Ruber shows interest in Naira and Hayden. Just what are this priest’s intentions?

 

 

    ·       Carmen Castellano: both secretary and loyal friend of Alderney. They have known each other for a long time and once formed a team together with Ruber. Things got out of hand at a certain point however and the group split up, with Ruber going his own way (and becoming the high priest after he started getting visions/messages from God). When she meets the high priest, things are awkward because of past events and she’s distrustful, to say the least.  Can she guess what Ruber is planning on doing with Naira and Hayden?

 

 

 

    ·       Pearl: pretty much everything is unknown about this girl. As a baby she was adopted by Ruber and was raised and trained by him. She’s the priest’s precious girl and his best student.  Rumours are that Pearl was the very first Messorem, but underneath her beautiful face lie dark dirty secrets. Pearl is pretty much the embodiment of “Looks can be deceiving”.

 

Well I guess I’ve said enough. What do you guys think? Were you surprised by some changes? Curious perhaps? Please let me know! Thanks for reading ^^

 

T.

Xxx

 

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Need to talk

4 min read

Hey guys it’s
me!



I’m writing
this journal because I have something to talk to you guys about.



Those who
have been following my DID story probably have noticed that I’ve been working
less and less at this story. This has two causes: one I’m busy with my everyday
life and this video I’ve been working on nearly non-stop. But that sadly is not
the only cause.



The more I
think about the progress of the story, read the old chapters and make art, the
less pleased I am with this story. Frankly I just don’t feel like writing at it
anymore because I don’t really like it anymore. That’s perhaps put quite
strongly, but yeah… DID never was meant to be a story consisting of so many
chapters. I started it with a horror one shot and just kept on writing more and
more chapters. Sadly this affects the story greatly and not in a good way.
There’s no real story line, no goal, no back bone and this has been irritating
me to no end lately... And yet this story is still my precious baby and I don’t
want to throw it aside, because I’ve worked so hard on it so far. All the art
and chapters… I could just force myself to write the few last chapters since
the end is near, but I’m afraid they will be written half heartedly. I had many
plans for the sequel of DID too: DID- Amnesia, but I don’t think I’ll ever get
to write this story.



The reason
I’m writing this is because I don’t want to let you guys in the dark and want
you to know why I haven’t been working on DID lately. I’m just stuck and don’t
know what to do. Like I said earlier I could just write the last chapters and
get it over with, but if I’m going to finish a story I want to do it well not
half heartedly. Sometimes I just wonder if I should just start the story all
over again, because I’ve come up with all kinds of new ideas and concepts. I’m
especially working on my angel concept because my old angels were far from
impressive (which angels are in my eyes), plus I would like to add a goal in my
story, a red line to follow, because let’s be honest guys, Naira has no goal in
this story and a good story has a goal, a quest you could say. And as for now,
DID is just one one-shot after the other, not a real story in my eyes. On the
other hand…this means that I have to start all over again and this will take
aaaaaages and discourages me a little too.



Now that
you’ve all read this, what do you guys think? I know you can’t make decisions
for me and that’s not what I meant to do with this journal either, but you guys
have supported me for so long so I wanted to let you know. Also special thanks
goes to my friends: Kay-chan, Tsuki and Kassie because you’ve guys been
following this story from almost the beginning and never gave up on me and ever
so patiently waited for me to upload a new chapter. Love you guys so much!



Wow ok this
journal got so long, didn’t intend to do that ^^” anwyway I’ll leave it at
that. Thanks for reading!



Xxx



T.

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I did it! I finally finished the video! *nuns sing hallelujah in the background*
*cough cough* Ok so for those who wonder what I'm waffeling about, I mean the 'ask me questions video'.
For those who would like to see it, here's the link:



Please excuse my horrible grammar and shizzle, I just got so nervous that I made all kinds of mistakes and was often at a loss for words. When I watched the video afterwards I was like: it's drew not drawed! and no it's tangled and not tingly or whatever! xD
Anyway I hope you guys like it none the less ;)

xxx
T.
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Hey guys it's me, le Tessa! 0w0

Just wondering if any of you guys have anymore questions because monday I'm going to make the video.
If you do have questions feel free to ask me now!
That's all I guess xd

xxx
T.
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Hey guys, it's me! Le Tessa! *a wild Tessa appeared*

So I've been thinking about this for quite some time and I was wondering if you would be interested in me making a video in which I will answer YOUR questions here on dA.
You can ask me all kinds of things!

My fav color, animal, ...
my hobbies
perosnal stuff
about my characters and stories
my opinion on certain matters
and whatever you can come up with!

Let me know if you guys are interested and if so then leave your questions in the comments below!
Ok see ya!

Love,
Tess xxx
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